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Friday, August 28, 2020

Marshmellow

 Hello today i am going to be showing you my poem i did on a marshmellow. 

I used all 5 senses


                                                                Marshmellow

            On the outside, you look like:                                                  you smell like: 

           a fluffy pillow                                                                             A sweet lollipop

            a sugary blob                                                                            Sugary cube

            a squishy toy                                                                             like its from heaven 

           You sound like:                                                                          You taste like:

            your crackling                                                                           Amazing and awesome 

           your rubbing you fingers on concreate                                     marshmellow

          a pillow                                                                                      the cour of heaven

             you feel like:                                                                           pourdery cube

            sand 

            cracked concreate

            babys bottom

1 comment:

  1. Ari, well done on your marshmellow poem, it is good to see you thinking about your senses.
    Miss Gill.

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