Hello today i am going to be showing you my poem i did on a marshmellow.
I used all 5 senses
Marshmellow
On the outside, you look like: you smell like:
a fluffy pillow A sweet lollipop
a sugary blob Sugary cube
a squishy toy like its from heaven
You sound like: You taste like:
your crackling Amazing and awesome
your rubbing you fingers on concreate marshmellow
a pillow the cour of heaven
you feel like: pourdery cube
sand
cracked concreate
babys bottom
Ari, well done on your marshmellow poem, it is good to see you thinking about your senses.
ReplyDeleteMiss Gill.