Kia Ora Bloggers and welcome back to my blog, this week we were in lock down so we had to distance learning. For writing we had to make a speech on why schools should or should not ban junk food. I chose to write about why school should not ban junk food. I wrote my speech bit by bit.
First I started with a title
Then I did a introduction stating my opinion and rhetorical question
Next I did 2-3 sentences with 3 different ideas
After that I did a summary/ending
And lastly I did a complex, compound and simple sentence.
Here is my Speech
Why Schools Should Not Ban Junk Food
Schools should not ban junk food. Well I know what most parents will be thinking,
most parents will be against me cause junk food is not good for you.
Don’t waste your time peeling mandarins or cutting apple slices.
You can just put some junk food in their lunch box and it's good to go.
You can just have a piece or two of fruit after school to balance out all that bad sugar.
If you have junk food for lunch it will help you get through the rest of the day.
And because of the reasons above I believe that junk food should be allowed at school.
If schools ban junk food the kids will be unhappy. I don’t think that schools should ban junk
food, it’s true all kids love it! We all love junk food.
Are you against me and thinking that schools should ban junk food or are you with me and schools should not ban junk food?
Thank you for looking on my blog this week Bye!
Hi Ari,
ReplyDeleteI think you are probably right in thinking that most parents would like junk food banned from school.
You put across a good argument trying to convince us that schools should allow it though! Packet junk food is a lot easier than peeling and cutting fruit for the lunchbox, but I actually think it’s worth this effort knowing I’m giving healthy food to my children! As you can see, I’m against your argument, even though you have some good points!
What is your favourite treat food for your school lunch?
I also liked how you explained at the start, the steps you followed to write a good persuasive piece of writing for your speech. Well done.
Kia Ora Kirstin,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog this week. My favorite treat food in my lunch is chocolate. What's your favorite treat food?
Thanks
Ari
My favourite junk food is definitely chocolate too, especially pineapple lumps!!
DeleteYum! Sounds delicious. What is your favorite fruit? My favorite fruit is watermelons or strawberry.
DeleteThanks
Ari
Hi Ari,
ReplyDeleteMy favourite fruit is water melon, closely followed by raspberries. All are either bite sized or can be cut into bite sized pieces and easily slipped into a lunch box. I am not for junk food in a lunch box, however that's not to say that I don't like junk food, I love skinny fries BUT all in moderation not everyday!
Thanks for sharing.
Mrs Ferguson
Kia Ora Mrs Ferguson,
DeleteThank you for looking on my blog this week. I love watermelon too.
What is your lest favorite fruit?
Ari