Kia Ora Bloggers and welcome back to my blog, this week for writing we had to make another persuading text. This time we could write about what ever we want, I chose to do why people should stop littering. Our goal this week is Vary sentence beginnings, structures and length. Write simple and compound sentences.
Here is my writing
Why People Should Stop Littering
People should stop littering. Do you want the earth our home to look like a rubbish bin?
The earth would be a sad place because all the animals would be getting extinct.
If you want to have a nice walk on the beach it would be really hard because
there would be rubbish everywhere. If you are walking or running you might
trip over the rubbish.
And because of the reasons above that is why I truly believe that people
should stop littering.
If you don’t stop littering the earth would be a sad place. I don’t think that
people should keep littering, We don’t want the earth to look like rubbish.
Did I persuade you?
Thank you for looking on my blog this week. Bye!
Kia Ora Ari,
ReplyDeleteWow what a good blog post. I love your rhetorical question. Maybe next time you could you highlight your compound and complex sentences. I love your reasons why we should not litter. You definitely persuaded me not to litter.
What was your favourite reason why we should not litter?
Zoe
Kia Ora Zoe,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog this week. Yes, next time I will highlight my compound and complex sentences. My favorite reason is that you should not litter because the animals might get extincted and we will not have any animals or pets which would be really sad.
What is your favorite reason why we should not litter?
Thanks
Ari